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Complete Draft–Professor Feedback
Dear Ashton, Congratulations on finishing your rough draft! This is a huge accomplishment in itself. And getting it done on
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Ashton Letter 1 Dear Ashton The Homeless Patient Comments Significant Revision of Excerpt Comments Hi Ashton, Sorry, I’ve been moving
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First Five Pages–Professor Feedback
Dear Ashton, Congrats on finishing the first 6 pages of “The Homeless Patient”! Since it’s so early in the process,
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Feedback from a peer, and brainstorming how to fix it She was confused on Dawson’s job. She thought he was