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Major Revision

aeiwrites / April 24, 2017

My plan was to rewrite the majority of my story from scratch. I successfully did that for one section. I […]

aeiwrites / April 22, 2017

Mentor Feedback 1 Mentor Feedback 2

aeiwrites / April 21, 2017

Dear Ashton, Congratulations on finishing your rough draft! This is a huge accomplishment in itself. And getting it done on

aeiwrites / April 21, 2017

Ashton Letter 1 Dear Ashton The Homeless Patient Comments Significant Revision of Excerpt Comments Hi Ashton, Sorry, I’ve been moving

aeiwrites / April 21, 2017

Dear Ashton, Congrats on finishing the first 6 pages of “The Homeless Patient”! Since it’s so early in the process,

aeiwrites / April 19, 2017

First off, I need more time to revise. Other projects, particularly those made way more complicated than they should be,

aeiwrites / April 10, 2017

In The Art and Craft of Fiction, Michael Kardos creates the “motivational continuum” that delineates a person’s internal motivation (p.117-119). He

aeiwrites / April 4, 2017

Thoughts on Saint Maybe by Anne Tyler There is humor at the beginning in an overly serious tone. However, as the formality

aeiwrites / April 3, 2017

Thoughts upon finishing Stygo by Laurie Hendrie Depending on chapter, it mixes 3rd person and 1st person narrators. The 3rd person

aeiwrites / March 31, 2017

Thoughts on Machine Dreams by Jayne Anne Phillips As with Out of Peel Tree, the fragmented stories are hard to get into,